All Comments on 'People Watching'

Brett is not ready to get into a serious relationship. And the woman our narator is not a woman that he or anyone else should want to marry. Obfuscation and deceit is what this little tale is all about. If he goes forward in his relationship with her, he will eventually find out and the outcome will not be good. ****

of infallible PIs is good by me. Even if it hadn't been so funny, well-written and thoroughly enjoyable, that alone would have earned the 5* I'm giving it.

and womens logic who pulls the upset. TK U MLJ LV NV

Watch people carefully enough, then take appropriate action, dependent on those few fetishes already evident from your own observations? This truth; remains the secret to universal erotic reader contentment in OUR 'Sisterhood's view!

she is after all cheating with a woman

no respect, no truth, no love here, just a woman wanting to be bred and paid for

Posting this in Lesbian would totally spoil the 'twist!'

It is reasonably well done. Unfortunately, she is too pure, despite the false negatives of 'disguised client/hooker', gay Muslim, and Bro birthday! That only left 'carpet-munching' as a reason to post in LIT!

4*

Very interesting story. Thanks for sharing.

I hated the ending. Fucking cunt. Cheating is cheating. Now time to read your alternate ending.

guy got betrayed by a blowup doll (no way a real girl would have anything to do with a no-life freak like betrayed) so now he lives here 24/7 where he can't pollute the gene pool by reproducing, thank god for lit!

A a hiliorious interesting twist at the end.

It was one of your stories I'd not read, so I was glad to make its acquaintance.

In my head Temple, who apparently enjoys catching out cheaters and is probably not best pleased with Karen, goes ahead with his surveillance even if he's dismissed while she's abroad.

Nice twist at the end going to read the alternate ending.

Men may not be a threat but the woman will unless he is included in a threesome.

Your protagonist is a piece of shit but good story.

A different slant, but still a cheating slut.

But saw the end coming as soon as the airport scene started.

Would she be okay with him hooking up with a gay guy? Somehow I think not.

Thanks for sharing.