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JustForPostingalmost 14 years agoCrappy writing
Many examples, but I'll cite one: "...holding a breast to braise himself" -- to "braise" means to cook food. No punctuation skills, spelling sucks, just generally bad, bad, bad.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoSpell
I have to agree; spelling, verb tense, word usage (threw for through, example) just made this a total distraction.
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