Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Pepto Bismo Dreams Ch. 02'

by the Troubador

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting

Let the punishment fit the crime.

Boyd

Blue88Blue88over 18 years ago
Superb

This left me disturbed and uneasy, as the author, I'm sure, intended. A dark tale, superbly told.

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Very Well Done

Excellent. It was well written and well plotted.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 18 years ago
Master story teller

This house is going to have some interesting tales and I will be quite happy to read every one of them. No one weaves a story like the Troubador!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
GREAT STORY..REALLY LIKED THE ENDING

ADD MORE DETAILS ABOUT THEIR LIFE AFTER PARTNERS DEATH

mike2710mike2710about 11 years ago
Thanks

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas

Jalibar62Jalibar625 months ago

I agree with commenters who said it could use a few more details after the death. Just a little.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Pepto Bismo Dreams Ch. 01 Previous Part
Pepto Bismo Dreams Series Info