by dojoguy2006
so fucking twisted that it needs an encore... great work, CH 2-10 PLOX!
eager to read more of this...
more "submissive" females. Do most of the men on this site think that all women secretly want to be forced, abused and humiliated? Or do you just WISH it were so?
I'm going to work on more of this. However, it's going to take some time since this is my first real writing effort. Your feedback motivates me to add more!
To anonymous people who leave judgmental, i.e.- not critical but combative comments, I recommend not reading what bothers you!
great story, definitely need more of amanda in the next one and Elian manipulating people. chhers man
...just go away! That's the easiest thing in the world to do! I am NOT a submissive female, and agree that this story is a man's dream come true, but it's still well-written and an intriguing story. And it differs from the ever-popular James Bond exactly how? I'll wait patiently for the next chapter.... :)
People who cruise around just looking for stories to offend them should probably get....ummm.....a life?
When I read this it was like discovering the X-men again.
Please continue.
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Great story, cant wt for more, fantastic blend of action syfy and sex.