All Comments on 'Performance Enhancer'

by dojoguy2006

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ummm....

so fucking twisted that it needs an encore... great work, CH 2-10 PLOX!

eager to read more of this...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh goody--

more "submissive" females. Do most of the men on this site think that all women secretly want to be forced, abused and humiliated? Or do you just WISH it were so?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hot stuff

Hot stuff can not wait for the next instalment

dojoguy2006dojoguy2006over 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for compliments; raspberries to others

I'm going to work on more of this. However, it's going to take some time since this is my first real writing effort. Your feedback motivates me to add more!

To anonymous people who leave judgmental, i.e.- not critical but combative comments, I recommend not reading what bothers you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great story, definitely need more of amanda in the next one and Elian manipulating people. chhers man

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelabout 12 years ago
Anonymous trolls....

...just go away! That's the easiest thing in the world to do! I am NOT a submissive female, and agree that this story is a man's dream come true, but it's still well-written and an intriguing story. And it differs from the ever-popular James Bond exactly how? I'll wait patiently for the next chapter.... :)

People who cruise around just looking for stories to offend them should probably get....ummm.....a life?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it

When I read this it was like discovering the X-men again.

Please continue.

ES

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
triple x men

Great story, cant wt for more, fantastic blend of action syfy and sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
go on!!

Waiting for sequel... plz plz get it out soon!!:-)

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