All Comments on 'Perversions and Transgressions Ch. 04'

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sluttywife4usluttywife4uabout 14 years ago
Wow!

I have read all four chapters, and I have to say that it was the most erotic story I have read on this site or any other. And it was so well written that I became a part of the story. It was as if I were right there as a hidden voyeur.

I had a similar event involving my husband's best friend, but that is a whole story in itself.

Please keep writing! You are extremely talented, and you sure pushed all of my buttons! I definitely had to "take care" of myself by the time I finished reading!

Sandy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More.....

So erotic, cannot wait for next chapter.... brilliant fantasy..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
This is the best thin on web, Please upload more stories

I hope Denise gets drugged and then brutally fucked by some guy both she and this story teller hates. There must be throat job and anal sex. Also no doggy sex till now? It will be good too if two guys fuck her at the same time (another one black guy with huge dick joins in) and repeatedly in various positions. That would be the best!

long time no story

really looking forward to it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Please More Story

This is so horny series..need more..and yes more positions...thanks

perversionsandtransgressionsfanperversionsandtransgressionsfanabout 13 years ago
Hey

This is the best story among the four in terms of description of sex which is very long and descriptive. I can see that your writing has improved. Please add more stories. I can see that you have stopped writing. This is the most creative stuff on this website. Reminds me of notes from underground by fyodor dostoyevsky. But really man, this story is so awesome. All it needs is more creativity and lots of more fucking. Thanks

CoolBreeezCoolBreeezover 11 years ago
Absolutely Incredible Story

A Work of Erotic Art!

Terri19Terri196 months ago

Awesome loved it so much detail and cant wait for more and see how much more he cooks up for Denise!

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