All Comments on 'Phallic Imitation'

You have a crisp but fun writing style that hooks the reader. This story captures the reason why D/S works, mutuallity of desire and surrender. Although you were the Domme, you knew the thrill of your control and use of him was only equal to his need to submit to you. A mind balance that has to be there for D/S to work. I look forward to more of your stories.

That was a powerful introduction to a new writer's talent! Very well done and a warm welcome to Literotica. This little gem has just gained you five stars and a new fan.

More, please and thanks for sharing!

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