All Comments on 'Phoenix'

another ASP story - I am loving it already

I'm so jealous that you have time to write all this... sigh... A little curious as to how Reming knew her name was Tama Semi Ar, but he's a smart guy.

I love the ASP stories! So pleased to see another one starting...I'm already speculating about what Reming's eyes are like. There has to be a reason he is wearing sunglasses because it's mentioned just way too often LOL!

off on another adventure at the ASP offices....can hardly wait...wonder if this is the time the big man found his mate....huummmm...Looking forward to the unfolding of the Pheonix's wings.....

looking for spell check!!! smile

Yeah, how did Reming know Tama's name? I thought her license, etc was for a Tama Phoenix. Speaking of Reming, I think I've got a crush ... yumm.

I didn't know it was going to be ASP until partway through. Interested in all these new people. Also interested in finding out what her mission is. It's a bit odd that she was so timid and nervous before her initiation and now she's cocky and full of herself. I expected confidence but not this much bravado. I don't like her yet but I assume I'm going to. Very interested in Reming and what he really knows about her. He already knows her last name, so it's possible he's a touch know as well. Looking forward to more.

Okay you've got me caught. I enjoy your stories a lot. More please ...

I really enjoyed this story and i can not wait for more. Please continue with this.

When will the rest be coming.Its rough to get interested then nothing more for months...

You're a good writer and this was the first story of yours I've read. I liked it, but I'm so disappointed you never finished it! That's my biggest pet peeves; I'd rather not even see in-progress stories that stay unfinished more than a year later.

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

I never know what surprises to expect!

Please please finish this story. It has great potential

Yes it is a great beginning with just enough background and character development to trap you into wanting much much more. I hope you come back to this and continue the story.

The Infamous Anonymous.