All Comments on 'Picking up the Pieces Ch. 10'

it get dumber as it go.no logic or sense.has he turn gay.

Been with you from the start. Loving the story so far and was wondering when you would tie your other story, Distribution and now you say that Electives is also coming.

Great story, good characters and a man of ethics to a degree and kinda lost. But keep it up. Thanks for time and talent.

He seems to be constantly being hit by trucks....

and so did the story. After that it was all nonsense.

REG,

Great writing.

This is amateur fiction, right? Some act like it was $19.88 @ Wally World. But I agree with most that this is a great fiction and I certainly enjoy your imagination.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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Love the story..when the next part?''and can you hurry it up..lol..thx

A REALLY GOOD STORY. I HOPE THE FOLLOWUP STORIES ARE JUST AS GOOD.

I enjoyed greatly reading all three of your stories. I would have liked them better if I’d known you had written a series of three and if, in a forward, you had listed the, in chronological order instead of alphabetical order. Instead, I had to read them out of sequence. You need an editor as you had several spelling and grammatical errors. It was a good story and I did enjoy it. I almost gave you four stars for having to read them out of sequence. I,was tempted to go back and read “Distribution” again but I devoted three days to reading what you wrote so decided to move on to something else. Good luck with your future writings. If you want an editor, let me know.