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by AlexisPeignoir

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AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
Very good, young lady. Your word pictures--

were not only clear, they were vivid. I, personally, am a fan of "what if" type of endings and to me, yours fit that catagory very well. It showed a lot of thought and planning. In words of few syllables, I enjoyed it and thank you.

rombo034rombo034over 9 years ago

Très, très fantastique!

It builds a great anticipation, that is met in a rather unpredictable way.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well, Petrie certainly had some great erotic pleasures with this lovely mystery lady and he will always have those memories. But every time he thinks of her, he'll wonder, will I ever see her again. Only Jasmine and the tease Alexis know for sure. Enjoyable tale and a lovely fantasy.....I wonder what would happening if they found each other, again..... and again....

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