All Comments on 'Picture Perfect Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love story

A nice romantic story about the development of two sweet men coming together for love rather than sex. It developed naturally with just enough sexual action to aid the relationship but not so much as to overwhelm the story.

A great well written read. Hope for many more

KatryneKatryneover 9 years ago
Love it!

I love the pacing of this story. It feels very realistic. I am having such a good time reading about Jason and Aleksi. I think Aleksi is one of my favorite fictional characters ever. I look forward to more if it is in your plans.

dez421dez421over 9 years ago
amazing

So beautifully written an amazing love story. :-)

nanobotnanobotover 9 years ago
oh sweet!

My heart dissolved utterly. I felt their bliss. How wonderful it is when we let go to find ourselves.

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 9 years ago
Great!

Sexy, touching, sweet, honest. So terrific. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Beautiful!!

bigkahoonabigkahoonaover 9 years ago
Wow I loved it

You have done it again. Bravo.

PeachyWifePeachyWifeover 9 years ago
Now What?

I finished all your stories and loved every every one. What do I read now?!

I would gladly read many more adventures with Aleksi and Jason! Or anything else, actually. Please give us some more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Wow! i cant stop reading your stories! so good, well written ad oh so sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!!!!

I wish somebody would fuck me just as you describe. It was so wonderful that I felt like a cock was fucking me and my cum flooded over my stomach and face!!

Can we have more!

ProerosProerosover 9 years ago
You are wonderful

Tamgreen, I cannot describe how horny you make me. I agree with Anonymous who wished that he could be fucked the way Jason got done. Me too!!!. You have become my all time favourite despite me reading thousands of stories from countless other Authors. I will always be on the outlook for you future writings. I LOVE YOU!!!

juggalosexkittenjuggalosexkittenover 9 years ago
more?

The end of this was perfect, but I could definetly read more.

legerdemerlegerdemerabout 9 years ago
Pitch-perfect ;-)

Terrific ending. Sweet romance. Neither here nor there- do gay men "dream" of converting straight men to their true nature like women "dream" of converting gay guys? Me, I just appreciate the awesomely fluid gradient of human nature and sexuality. Beautiful writing. You're NO novice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!

That was a beautiful ending <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
kiss me ..

I'm feeling hard and warm and wet .. write a story about you and me .. I'm Tony and |I want you ..

LeeclarkLeeclarkover 8 years ago
sequel

This I amazingly written and needs a sequel. I give you five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so seductive

i love how they were got so drawn towards each other, neither having the lead but both discovering themselves and each other along the way. Love is hard to find for any one and I applaud anyone who loves and is loved back no matter colour, creed and gender. Loved this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Not a relationship that will last, safe to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love!

I love this story, especially being immersed in Aleksi's accent. Written very well, great descriptive uses :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved this!

Sweet and hot! And I am not gay or a guy. You really told the story well, seduction and love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very impressed!

Not even gay, but definitely didn't matter in this story. Lovely story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow nice ending

Very nice ending to a hot and sensual story. Three cheers to the author. Oh my I think I need a need a hot long haired bf now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Got my heart racing and other parts throbbing!

So hot!!! Plus it's romantic. I love these kinds of stories.

liz33ndliz33ndover 3 years ago

oh wow, so erotic

monocatmonocatalmost 3 years ago

Favorite story so far, has such raw emotion...I'm so glad the mom excepted them being together. Hoping there will be a sequel even though this is an old story… ( o=^•ェ•)o ┏━┓

dnsontndnsontnalmost 3 years ago

In one word: Beautiful

Bi75tedBi75tedover 1 year ago

That was one beautiful tale. Enjoyed the plot immensely and the way you developed the characters. Not just in this chapter but thought your descriptions of sex are equally well crafted and erotic. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

So erotic and romantic at the same time, their love is so pure ❤

Summer1987Summer19873 months ago

This story is seriously so beautiful and it's so fucking impressive you were able to pack so much character and relationship development into such short stories. I would seriously fucking LOOOOVE reading this as a novel. If you ever decide to write a book, reworking this story as a novel or even novella would be golden!

This is one of the first stories I ever read on this site and I find myself coming back to it regularly.

Beautiful work, seriously!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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