All Comments on 'Pigs Can Be Great Lovers Too'

Did you nail this one or what. I was lucky. I had both the small town and the city when I was growing up. From the way you write, I expect the same happened to you. Whatever--it is a perfect description of what it is like. And some people wonder why so many relate to Mayberry!!!!!

Great story.

Not to me. I am still wondering why he said nothing when he and his wife were insulted.

When Jerry did nothing maybe even Charlie got to wondering what the secret was.

To the critic who asked why he hadn't told his wife about his pre-marital past; What is in the past belongs in the past. He didn't ask (I assume), and he didn't tell, and other then disease or paying child support that's how it should remain with one other exception: previous marriages. You have a short story that makes you think and that's good. Ronnie W.

I found this to be a very well done story with an awesome twist. Kudos for the non-alpha ("nice guy") coming in first for a change! And in such an elegant and well-written manner, too!

I took more courage and strength to not tell than to tell. That is probably why a reader would not get the meaning of this story.

I like the guy in this story, no kiss and tell man is he! Now that the wife knows, the joke is on the other guy. Good work, not the usual run of the mill stuff.

A god little story, with a nice twist. I enjoyed reading this one.

Thanks for the read! It was refreshing to read something different.

Saxmate

Something we seldom see on the erotic sites. I enjoyed it very much, even if it didn't have the emotional highs and lows I normally look for in these stories.

Scribe36

Apparently I am one of the few readers who think this was a senseless atory. What has the fact that Jerry had an affair with Charlie's wife years ago and may be the father of one of Charlie's chidren have to do with letting Charlie insult and humiliate Jerry's wife? Why should his wife suffer for his stupidity and Ann's adultery years ago? Dumb plot. 60 year old G

Made a nice change, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I liked the ending, reminded me of the saying ‘He who walks softly, but carries a big stick’.

My regards to the writer.

Robert.

A most excellent tale. Thank you.

As regards what appears to be your first effort - it couldn't have been much better. A style comes though that is credible and your hero is likeable. Your story was one of lifes possiblities and that made it entertaining to read.

It isn't necessary for stories to be unrealistically raunchy and sex every other paragraph for a good read - you did that well without the unnecessary ornaments often found here.

Thanks - Please keep an even keel as we need more authors with talent that we can respect that entertain us. with Regard

Good story. Like the original twist on a sometimes tired genre. Still, the protagonist never did really answer his wife...

Good job on a well written story. It was fun to read and had a pleasant, happy ending.

This well written chapter took the bitter taste out of wife's mouth, because Ann would love to have another chance with Jerry

Despite only a little sex, it was very accurate about the consequences of relationships...good and bad. IT illustrated the innuendo and sublety of small towns. Well concieved and well written.

Because your animosity toward Black Americans is a bit too much for me. BUT, in this instance I'll give you a "100". Two reasons: One, I actually liked this story and two, 60 year old George didn't so that means you have a Man (male + functioning balls, brains and control =Man)in it. Kudos! Not many Men in LW tales.

pleasant and original

Enjoyed the story look forward to more of your writings

One of the worst on this site. There is no story structure, no character development. Just mindless would be stroke story.

Did I say one of the worst??

Loved the brevity and the weird moral. Pigs fucking and loving wives...brilliant!

This mental diarrhea of inept "writer" Is one of the worst,and I agree with anon comment 100% !!

I guess it takes dementoid to even attempt to read it.

Loved it, its such a pity that the less mentally able readers like roscovich completely miss the point.

And it looks like he have some other like Poms reading this garbage. Oh well, "birds of the feather" ! "1*" !

Maybe a little humorous but it doesn't excuse cheating and nothing excuses having to raise another man's child. If the tale was continued there would be trouble.

Then again, who wants to read Pigs part 2?

HA

he suckled the juicy cock, cornhole was in business, betrayed!

Why are they laughing? He possibly has a kid with his ex-lover and he swept it under the rug. How can Susan be OK with that?

***** I love it because it is different than almost anything else in the category. Well done.

Mindless garbage !

Funny little story. Something a little different.

One of the greatest put downs is to ignore someone. To know that what they think and what they do matters naught.

One time a man who was trying to intimidate me publicly was insulting me and the work I do, I told him and the folks around us: “I’ve had people pissing on my leg who could reach a lot higher than you can!”

The resulting chuckles and laughter humiliated the dumb shit, and thereafter he avoided whenever he could.

Chilleywilley

Short and wickedly sweet!

Very interesting and very good story. It is unlike any other story here. Congratulations on your originality.

Nice story.

Not sure if I could let something like that slide, even knowing that the jerk was raising my kid. This is a short and strange story that I'm not sure how to take. I think I like it but not so sure about remaining silent for so long. I guess Jerry is the better man than I would be.