All Comments on 'Pine Tree Hiss'

Wonderfully done. Darkmass got the European

curt, direct and a bit mysterious English down pat.

Like all good short stories, he conveys so much in

so few words. And the little details…the markings

the pine needles made”…”I was unclean” not “I felt

dirty”.

Couldn’t have been better.

shr

i like the feel. i also like that it doesnt explain everything. we live in a world where every plot twist is explained, where characters are dissected for us. sometimes there are no answers. sometimes the why is not the substance--- thanks darkmaas

I don't get it.

Not only was it poorly written, it doesn't make much sense.

One question... Why?