All Comments on 'Pipe Dreams Ch. 05'

I love this story so much... there were some mistakes on top of page 2, you switched Carrie's name to Maggie instead.. other than that it was wonderful.

keep the chapters coming. I really want to see what happens when her friend returns home.

It makes the fantasy aspect of the story very warm and inviting.

I cant w8 for the next chapter! The characters are so warm and dreamy! Makes one wish it could happen for real!

When I stumbled onto this story, I at first thought that it was just another were story. Now reading all 5 chapters I found that all the characters are coming to life and the story is pushing forward. The plot is thickening and new characters are emerging nicely.

Please write more soon, can hardly wait for the next chapter.

on pg 2 when lina is talking to carrie you switched the name o maggie then back again. other then that wiating for the next chapter.

I wish I was a more patient person, I really like this series but I am soooo impatient it isn't funny. I hope new chapters come soon... like now... lol

cant wait!!!! more please!!

More realistic pace than some stories I have read. He is actually taking time to court her. I like that.

Hey guys! Sorry it's been a bit since this updated. I've been sucked into the V-day contest. I did post a new chapter for this story 2 days ago so it should post sometime this week.

Sorry for the typos/name changes in Ch. 5. My editor/beta is a bit busy personally so I'm flying solo and well, you can see how that works out! Overall though, I'm glad you like it!