All Comments on 'Piss Games In Public'

So well written it got me hot anyway!

Very hot story for a first attempt at a fetish. I love watersports and this got me hot. Whould have loved it if your hero got a shower as well.

This is a very hot story. Keep it going with Katja pissing on your cock and face. As you say hopefully she has friends to join in this fun too.

Great story! I love the fantasy of watersports, even tho I've never had the courage to try it>

I liked it so much it's hard to believe it was your fist. As for suggestions, you've got a mobile home in a land of fetish. You've hit the ground running jsut keep it up

The best erotica really haunts you, and a year after I first read this, I still find myself drifting off to that German car park during dull business meetings!

Excellent story. love to read more things you do to Katja, using her as a total piss covered slut

Thoroughly enjoyable, I was a young guy in Germany at the same time and had some very kinky experiences - this seemed so real to me, good effort!

if, somewhat unlikely story, though one can always hope.

Next time add SCATTING and PROLAPSE in your stories to make more fetish.