All Comments on 'Pitching to Mom'

by stevie3624

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Scorcher-

You write some very erotic stories this is yet another one.

sbulldogj23sbulldogj23almost 16 years ago
I couldn't have enjoyed it more!!!!

great story. PLEASE keep writing mom/ son stories !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Well done

That is what this site is all about. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
great stuff

good one as usual.can make it better if you add some lactation and babymaking to your stories.you rock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You're the best stevie

I always get excited when I see your name on the new submissions page. And as always, you never disappoint. Your mother/son stories are the best!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago

Great writing--great story! Hot, great feeling and emotionally moving. Indeed, you rock! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
mom lover, but on-nown yet.

yah I really love your stories of mom/son sex, but where's the anal taking of the mom bye the son?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great

It is an off beat story with impressive literary content and bulid up. Great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
not your best

stevie ,plot line is good , could have done with more input from you

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
beautiful

The story is just beautiful and the love was perfect. When the mother and son finally became man and wife in her eyes,it was the most perfect love that they could ever experence. I was totally into the story and thought it was perfectly writen. Thank you ..............Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
a beautiful mother and son fuckfest

This lovely story concerns a big athletic son's infatuation with his mother's precious twat and his mother's deep need for her son's big demanding dick. Johnny's been obsessed with his mother's cunt for years, and his mom's often had her blushing eyes on what her darling boy has swinging in his pants. It takes a bit of persuasion on Johnny's part, but he soon opens his mother's mind--nothing is more natural than for a son to seek out his own mother's loving twat to penetrate it, plow in and out, up and down, and all mothers know it! And now Johnny's gonna fuck his baby up his own mother's cunt! What can ever beat that?

robinsimpson1robinsimpson1almost 12 years ago
I said ,she said

I said ,she said !!! I counted 31 times, LOL !! That is a bit much of he said she said . Fucker

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I think this was a good story, almost more worthy of the "Romance" category. The he said, she said stuff didn't bother me. Who really counts that stuff on an erotica site anyway? I mean really?

CaptainJimCaptainJimabout 11 years ago
Very Good!

That was very good!

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Once in a while there is a surprise

and this is one.

A story written and submitted years ago that shows up as a "Similar Stories" suggestion. And it brings a smile and warm fuzzy feelings when read.

gobears85gobears85almost 7 years ago
Hit it out of the park

Baseball and incest. What a great double header.

doug_noughtdoug_noughtover 6 years ago
Thanks to gobears85

... whose comment led to bookmark this story. What a lovely tale of mom-son love. 5 stars.

nil_r2nil_r2about 5 years ago
mesmerising

Sacred love between mother ad son consummated!

lovedefactolovedefactoabout 3 years ago

Wonderful story. Great job. Thank you.

Mr_BradyMr_Bradyalmost 2 years ago

A great love story. A wonderful mother/son incest story, with some very good writing put into it. Highly enjoyable. Five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5 stars and what made this one better than a lot of your stories you didn't go down the anal road

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Hot !!! Hot!!! Hot!!!! Wonderful story you certainly brought the heat!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yes! Good story. Keep writing.

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