All Comments on 'PITrified Ch. 3'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Needs a lot of Improvement

This was terrible.. people don't talk like that during sex, and the hair is not a turn on.

swilliams3022387swilliams3022387almost 11 years ago
Definitely original

A few typos but it reads great

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The whole thing was revolting.

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