by PadmaBear
I love the long slow build up but was kind of disappointed that things did not go farther in phase 3. It just seemed too brief and too little for the build up even with the promise of things to come. Who would have actually stopped there with things at that point? I think she should have gotten a little self release even if she left him with blue balls.
Still a very good story and looking forward the the next chapter.
Fallen Angel
I guess it doesn't help our ratings to not have more sex yet. Is this what being a TV exec feels like? When we've finished all of these we'll publish a revised version as a single story. Hopefully that will take care of some of the tease factor... :)
Well written story about a woman who thinks about what she is doing and doesn't just react to a minor problem with her husband and do something rash. Nice to see she has pubic hair and is not shaved bare, which would seem out of character for someone of her age group. Minor points like this make a story much more realistic in my opinion. I think I know where this story is going and will probably be disappointed in the ending, but will keep reading.
But I keep reading any way, hoping its not going there. I read your disclaimer but read it anyway. Damn me.
I would respond to "Great Story." If she satisfied herself sexually, in 90+% of LV stories she would be honor bound to give complete sexual satisfaction to her viewer (read fuck). I don't think this pair of writers is going to let themselves be backed into that corner. They may yet have her fuck this "perfect gentleman", but, if so, it will probably be because of something Cedric does, or doesn't do!
DO
And we're really curious to know where Sidney and RVWS think the story is going. :D
I have the opinion that Mr. X likes the way this is progressing as much as Sweetie likes her Plan C! Cedric is still busy making a good impression as his Sweetie has already made a much better impression!
Nice concept but got bored with all the repeatability
If he does turn up at 6-30 as planned then he needs to get a life! Because there's no way I can go on any longer!!!