All Comments on 'Planetfall Ch. 01'

I liked the story so far. It has some background information and good sex. I did find it to be sad though with Jane most likely dead.

Nice start. Had that Bowie tune in my head while reading this entertaining story. I'm counting on sweet Jane (Lou Reed tune) surviving and some of the locals getting to sample her before our hero saves everyone and they start their life anew. In any event I'll be reading.

Keep writing, I'd like to see where this goes.

seriously, good stuff, added to my watch list cant wait for more!!!

Great start to what promises to be an interesting read! Sad that Jane didn't make it from the ship, the sex between her and Richard was hot/sultry and mind blowing. Waiting patiently for the next installment.

Looking Forward to the Next Installment

Very interesting and a lot of fun so far. I hope you continue and finish this story. Sounds like it has a lot of potential. I hope Jane is OK and will find Richard. Or were all the other lifeboats destroyed?

Jane almost seemed to get off on the idea of Richard finding a harem with that planet full of women. Should be interesting once Richard tries to introduce himself to that society. Please update soon.

Great beginning. Well done!

I love it so far.

JC

Good read. great plot. waiting to read chapter 2

Sad to see the author hasn't posted a chapter in years. :(