by theo_minor
Wonderful story. A creative and unexpected ending: happier than I imagined. Jeff unintentionally won the lottery. Congratulations.
Great story, could picture the action and imagine the complex feelings.
Would love to read more about the two couples.
Watch where you're pointing that thing...
Jeff is loaded with sperm and can impregnate any woman within range. Good story with a twist. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thank you for making the story so erotic and wholesome and pro-family all at the same time. Love the twist!
A little bit of a vague ending. Or maybe I’m just dense. Either way, I didn’t think the ending was very satisfying.
Okay, were left with a cliff-hanger here. Tracy has a mild heart attack at the news that Jeff wasn't shooting blanks, so maybe she is with child, and was just getting ready to tell Ron of the happy event. But oops, now she doesn't know if it might have freckles and red hair? Please finish us off!
Loved the twist at the end, look forward to Part 2 :)