All Comments on 'Playing Pool'

It's clear these two have wanted eachother for a long time! Lovely writing, clear and got acorss the want and desire they had for eachother. Had me caught in their passion with ease. I cant wait to read the next installment!!

Hot. Thank you.

If that's not a 5? There are no 5's!

Smoking hot! I just love your stories. Not many people can write short stories without losing the passion, but yours are excellent. This one's definitely my favorite. Hope there's a part two. xx

lovely. High quality writing. Thank you.

I have never been moved to comment but this was impressive. Wow. I wish I could put into words how good that short story is....

FIVE! Only a 5 will suffice for this story that is so tightly written leaving the reader panting for more, more, more.

I'm keeping this short as I must rread the rest of your material.

Waterman

This story blew my mind. I think I need to make an account so I can favourite it. 5

That was fucking awesome ! That had me hot. Please more.

I'm an American currently involved with an Australian and this story allowed for a perfect escape into my fantasies. I feel like it was written for me!

Eight ball, right breast pocket - Game!