All Comments on 'Playing Up Ch. 02'

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up

Thank you for reading my story, and voting/commenting. I should've put an introductory note in. I've had some life-changing struggles this past year but now I'm back to writing.

Anyway, Ch. 3 is drafted out, it'll probably be the last one. Let me know if you fancy a happy-ever-after or otherwise...be warned however my characters tend to do what they want.

Votes & comments appreciated, re-reading the ones from the first chapter really kept my chin up.

rz xxx

Very well written

Could we have some SBS in the next passage please.

I'd give that 240,000,000%

Chapter 3 needs some SBS.

I want him to find out he really cares about her, wants HER, but she makes him work like hell for it!

Where were they?

any SBS on the horizon then?

Biggest boner since PhilBB

I love this series - it's hot and natural, with quite likeable characters - and I hope you one day continue it. In the meantime, the comments have me wondering what SBS is meant to be. I'm going with "serious butt sex" mainly because I agree, and you'd write it up wonderfully.

fingerlicking good

I was delighted by the description of Rob going down on Sian. Most excellent! There was some strain on plausibility in how effortless it was for him to tie her up, but that's the only quibble. Sian's mood and behavior at the end is odd and intriguing -- hope you can pull it off believably in the next chapter.