by JaneDoe31
Suggestion: You might consider having your lover over while your husband hides. Make it passionate, quick (with a 30 minute window before you have to go pick up your husband from the gym or something).
Might be hot!?
OK story, but kept switching between first person "I" and third person "she" which makes it confusing to read. Pick one and keep it consistent.
The shifts from 1st to 3rd person POVs was really annoying...
Of the affair. Rather convenient of him. Make himself look like a bystander than an active and willing participant.