All Comments on 'Please Ch. 02'

I want more!!!! 💜💜 it

It makes your story look cheap and amateurish. If you want to show extreme confusion, describe it. If you want to covey a lot of happiness, elaborate! Throwing a bunch of exclamation marks and question marks doesn't make me understand what they're feeling, it just makes me think the author is lazy.

Same thing with the ellipses. There's only three dots in an ellipsis. Adding more not only makes grammatically incorrect, but it adds to destroying the reader experience.

Your story isn't bad at all, but these are simple mistakes.

I fucking hate authors like you on Literotica, who post great, A+, fantastic, 5 star worthy stories and don't even fucking finish them. This story is amazing so far and you just leave us hanging like this ElleDee? You should be so ashamed that you finish this story. We're growing impatient motherfucker! -B

I WISH I HAD A MICHAEL. LOL. PLEASE CONTINUE. THIS IS A VERY GOOD START. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE.

Tag this story: black woman, so I can find it again!!! I'm in love!

omg this is one of the hottest stories I've read, come back soon

Uh uh hello finish this great story

Please finish!

Pleaseeee finish ? ( no pun intended )

OMG you HAVE TO finish this story. HAVE TO! And it's not even that I'm a sucker for interracial, it's that this is one of the best stories here....just really amazingly sexy but sweet at the same time. MORE!

"Well first off, I don't have an accent" LOL!

This story is really intriguing, you have to continue. This is one of the best stories i have read on this site, please continue.

Do it! Go out with him!!!!

i hope you finish this story

I am going to ask if you will continue this series, or add more to what you have already given us to chew on???

Absolutely fantastic! I cannot wait to see what happens next...Bravo elledee to a job WELL done!

oh so good! another one of my favs ty ty ty

Yea, I want this to continue. Please!!!

But ohhh so good, can't wait for the next part.

SOOOO GOOD! love it

Five.

I just love this story. Please continue it. I want her to go out with him, so that she could get to know him better.

Great start.