All Comments on 'Please, Don't'

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peebudypeebudyalmost 14 years ago
whore-ay!

great story. I love reading about strong women who know what the want and don't apologize for getting it.

a lot of talk about her big ass, so hopefully there'll be a follow up story where he gets to bury that monstyer cock up in that shitter.

good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
It's always nice when a worthless whore finds a retard to take advantage of.

But put it in fantasy/scifi next time. Because no humans would actually behave as this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Dated Her

Or her template. Broke my heart. She was honest about being a slut, but my midwestern brain couldn't handle it until I came to hate her.

Dh500Dh500about 10 years ago

The ending invoked my ire.

Ps. A person shakes their head no, and nods their head yes.

Shake ( as in "to shake ones head") means: turn one's head from side to side in order to indicate refusal, denial, disapproval, or refusal. She shook her head in disbelief.

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Creative writing major in college. Made a career as a history teacher. My high school English teacher once told me that, should I ever encounter writer's block, try writing a pornographic scene. She said "a love scene," but I knew what she meant.