All Comments on 'Pleasing Mother Nature'

Good luck in the contest.

That's what you did. Simple, straightforward, and with some nice turns along the way. Your description of Pai was particularly nice.

If having sex in the forest would help keep it green, I would like to do my part. Just kidding

Good luck in the contest

DG

I love the story! I can imagine it being some kind of hentai movie too!

Your story is very similar to mine! I enjoyed!

I like the fucking too. 5 stars.

The story is simple and direct, the pace is strong and all the better for the sex to really get under your whiskers and turn you on. I enjoyed how you built up the main character's tension, making the sex savage, and reduced him to a "rutting...dog". As another commenter stated, the description of Pai was especially well-done. Great job.

I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and am really glad I found it through your post in the playground!

Wow naughty, never make me rea your writing again.

Love Mom.

Nice concept. Became too direct in the middle. Felt u cud have written a bigger one then it would have been much better

very clever and sexy...