All Comments on 'Pleasure Cruise Day 01'

yes Teri a very believable story(diary entry) totally enjoyable and not so much as a single error. Sure would have loved to spend some time under the stairwell with you even for a dirty old man you have my interest in this one and any ensuing writings love it ttfn Larry

I like the set up of the story, the whole scene seems natural, and the progression is solid. The talking during the sex scene kind of killed it for me. I just don't see the guy talking about her pussy like that, its just too blunt, almost like he was describing something to a doctor. Otherwise good job.