All Comments on 'Plight of a Paladin'

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mjm202036mjm202036over 15 years ago
Great story...

Other than grammatical errors, I found this story quite erotic. I hope you will write more in the future, to share with the readers and to build your abilities at writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Super hot!

It's always fun to read a sensual and erotic succubus story! Loved it!

HurbsterHurbsterabout 12 years ago

Great writing and sex - did not like the ending at all. The bloke always dies in these tales and it's getting a bit samey.

TernomTernomover 10 years ago

Very nice. Though what a bad luck for the paladin... to meet succubus on his first day.

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