by wolfenspirit131
Other than grammatical errors, I found this story quite erotic. I hope you will write more in the future, to share with the readers and to build your abilities at writing.
It's always fun to read a sensual and erotic succubus story! Loved it!
Great writing and sex - did not like the ending at all. The bloke always dies in these tales and it's getting a bit samey.
Very nice. Though what a bad luck for the paladin... to meet succubus on his first day.