All Comments on 'Plotting a Course Ch. 11'

by VaRiverWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Some repeats?

This latest chapter is not actually 17 pages long, because the newest part actually beings on page 15; the first 14 pages seem a recap of Rob and Bobby once they were separated at two different colleges.

It was fun and interesting, too, to catch up with Matt and Clint; I'm still looking forward to a wonderful Chapter 12 with a true reunion for Rob and Bobby. Those two young men are so much in love with each other, and so in tune with each other, I can't wait to see what their newest adventures in the bedroom will include. I'm looking forward to more reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

More Clint & Matt!!!

EricMorrisonEricMorrisonabout 10 years ago
Yay!

Love Clint & Matt!!!

I was a little confused, though, at first when I stared reading and it was Chapter 1, but then I saw it was 17 pages long and I figured it out. :D

I love how this relationship developed, and I can't wait to read more about Rob and Bobby.

Anita_CockeAnita_Cockeabout 10 years ago
CAN'T BE MAD...

I WANT TO BE MAD BUT JESUS CHRIST 17 PAGES IS A LOT. GOOD THING YOU PUT ALL OF THE OTHER CHAPTERS IN HERE BECAUSE AS LONG AS IT TOOK YOU TO WRITE THIS CHAPTER I DAMN NEAR FORGOT. IF YOU'RE GONNA DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS AGAIN YOU SHOULD DO WHAT THEY DO IN THE SHOWS & JUST SUMMARIZE EACH CHAPTER. OTHER HAN THAT THE CHAPTER WAS GREAT. I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT IF. CLINT AND MATT TELL THEIR PARENTS ABOUT EACH OTHER. (PS I'M ON MY PHONE AND TOO LAZY TO TAKE THE CAPS LOCK OFF)

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteabout 10 years ago
Great work

Loving the latest chapter with Clint & Matt. Looking forward to the continuation of the story of all four guys. Good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Casey 1988

A Clint and Mat chapter. I hope Clint and Mat can tell there parents they are gay and that they are together.

Btw the page is not 17 pages long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
love it.

Loved matt and clint but would like more of them with out rob and bobby. Rob and bobbys chapters are their world for the most part. Would be nice to have the same for matt and clint.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Gotta be honest

I like that your including more about matt and clint but I really prefer rob and bobby being the story centre. You can write matt and clint in a side story that runs in the same time frame and have more love to share that way, rather than switching between the two couples perspective

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I looooove Clint and Matt so so much!

Tink22004Tink22004over 5 years ago

I always wished you told us what happened to these two... I hope they are living their happily ever after.

dnsontndnsontnalmost 3 years ago

Delightful detour!

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