All Comments on 'Poolside'

by deathlynx

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
babasluvbabasluvover 17 years ago
Great Mental Imagery

Your words describing their surroundings captured their location perfectly.

I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nicely done

I loved your story! your words are magic.

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 16 years ago
Very hot story

Well detailed from both her perspective and his. Loved it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous