All Comments on 'Poolside'

by deathlynx

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MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 16 years ago
Very hot story

Well detailed from both her perspective and his. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nicely done

I loved your story! your words are magic.

babasluvbabasluvalmost 18 years ago
Great Mental Imagery

Your words describing their surroundings captured their location perfectly.

I enjoyed it.

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