All Comments on 'Poor Melinda Ch. 02'

by Scrumble

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o1dirtydogo1dirtydogover 10 years ago
too short...

can't fap to this... :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Could get better

Is she going to cock tease the hell out of him?

PassionateKissesPassionateKissesover 10 years ago
Getting there...

I am still liking your story. I think you are getting there. It is hard to write a lot at first. 'We' do love longer. However, I see a pattern on how you are breaking it up. Do your thing. It will all work out. I can't wait to read the next one.

Passion and Kisses xoxox

ScrumbleScrumbleover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the continued feedback

It's too short now but it will ultimately be about 8 chapters.

I feel the set up is necessary to establish the relationship. The remaining six chapters may or may not line up with your particular kink but they will involve more sex at least.

Chapter 3 has been submitted and will hopefully appear in a few days.

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