All Comments on 'Porn & Masturbation Ch. 03'

you should continue the story

i loved all three chapters. i'd be interested to see more though. so would cal, i bet!

All three were really well written. Keep going, your on a roll!

Yeah, this is a great series, i wish you would add to it.

Very Good. Where are the remaining chapters. You have built is up in a great way. However, I feel cheated. You quit way too soon. The sisters and brother shouled make it from good to excellent.

Great stoies, but when will chapter 4 be here?

That was great but when will you make ch. 04?

We want more! Please, give us chapter 4! This is a touching series of stories with intense, sensual, realistic scenes! Don't let up now!

Build it up slowly,adding guilt feelings so that it becomes more sexy as only forbidden fruit is exciting

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwioooooooooooooooooooooooooo mmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter 4! chapter 4!

Now that you have returned to us, will you finally be finishing this one?

Now that I'm writing again, I decided to read this one again since it's one of my personal favorites. I must say, it is very tempting to continue with this plot...

Great writing. I love both these girls already. I'm sure Cal has had a lifetime of frustration watching his two sexy sisters growing up, getting sexier and sexier, comparing his every thought and experience about sex with the fantasy of how it would be to do it with Lena and Mara. Which one would be the better fuck? Could he ever even get to first base with Lena? God, she was hot when he say her bare-assed in the bathroom. And those tits. Wow, what a great set of knockers. Oh, how he'd love to feel her up. But Mara was so much more outgoing. She probably looked just as good naked. Wonder if he could even get her to strip off someday? Maybe he could sneak into their room and install a wireless camera and see them strip off every night. Gee, did they ever get naked together? Did they let their boyfriends feel them up? Had they ever got laid? Did they give head? Wow, what would it be like to get a blowjob from either one of them? Wow, what about a real double-header?

i really want to read the 4th one now this story is so great

I'm deeply saddened by the thought that there has yet to be a fourth installment of this wonderful story. A hot threesome would be sweet and I hope you get the urge to type it out and share it with the erotic literature community.

I want a ch 4. it does need some COCK.

I agree with the rest of the posts..chapter 4 is a must-I was hard thru the first three

you definitely need to continue this awesome series, pleeeeeaaaassseee

More please.....

I came mine self several times when I read the stories about the twin sisters. I like to read how they seduce there brother and have sex with him. Maybe you can wright an story about the 3 of them being caught by there mother and she is joining in while there father is on an business trip.

Hope you wright more stories in this series soon.

i want a ch.4,5,6,7,8,9,and 10

What Anon said. Moar plz! :)

your stories get better and better the more you add, give more to this one and all your others.

would love to read a 4th chapter on what happens between Lena, Mara, and Cal

Already jacked off to one of your other stories tonight, you are very talented and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Five out of five.

Would really love to find out about cal Lena and Mara can't wait

Are you working on chapter 4 yet?? Please?! ;)

But ONLY a start this should have gone much further. As it is I rated it 3*, but with some work it could easily go to 5. Flesh out your story ... Please.

Please add another chapter with Cal being between the twins

This story will never be completed. It was bad enough to break it up into 3 pieces when it should have been one, but to leave it as a cliffhanger to never be completed is horrible. I have read all postings left under this user and he always leaves the stories incomplete, never to follow up and complete it.

Anony Mous

Great start, but why no follow up

Dang! What a waste of time!

At least I now know not to read anything else from this author.

Bill S.

I really liked this but see that it didn't go further. Sad!

Great read chapter getting sexier as it goes on wish it was my sisters I would jump at the chance to make love to both sisters