by sr71plt
I can tell when I enjoy a writer's voice, when I'm interested even if there's nothing overtly sexual going on. Keep it coming!
As always hot, but with an intriguing story line to support the sex. There seems to be so much more going on here. I hope to see more of these characters as the setting moves to NYC.
This was fantastic. The intrigue, the interaction between the characters, all great. 5 stars.
You delivered on all the story tags. Although telescoped a bit early, I loved the surprise, ending the deception between Tim and Julian. I found humor from the two 'queen size' beds instead of king, the Raggedy Andy comment, through Tim's thought if Marty had a name for his whip. I also laughed about Marty's $50 & $100 gifts to Tim. What a cheap insulting bastard!