by sr71plt
You delivered on all the story tags. Although telescoped a bit early, I loved the surprise, ending the deception between Tim and Julian. I found humor from the two 'queen size' beds instead of king, the Raggedy Andy comment, through Tim's thought if Marty had a name for his whip. I also laughed about Marty's $50 & $100 gifts to Tim. What a cheap insulting bastard!
This was fantastic. The intrigue, the interaction between the characters, all great. 5 stars.
As always hot, but with an intriguing story line to support the sex. There seems to be so much more going on here. I hope to see more of these characters as the setting moves to NYC.
I can tell when I enjoy a writer's voice, when I'm interested even if there's nothing overtly sexual going on. Keep it coming!