All Comments on 'Pornstar Ch. 01'

by SimonBrooke

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This is Good Fun

You built up the tension really well and now I can't wait to find out what happens next. Your characters are very well drawn and they play off each other brilliantly. Part two please!

x. Sadie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Pleasantly literate

It is a pleasure to read truly literate writing on this site, such as this story!

Also, the concept has a nice degree of originality, and it allows for a

good variety of characters.

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I'm here because I'm interested in stories, both in reading them and in writing them. Most of my own stories aren't strictly erotica, although they all revolve around the area of sexuality, dominance, violence.

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