All Comments on 'Posie's Plan'

The whole tale was great all the way through. I can't wait for more of Posie's experiences.

This was a fantastic story - you made it romantic and yet included a lot of exciting detail without it being clinical. It was four pages long and read like it was only two pages. I liked the little things, like the name Posie - unusual, and a little too cute, created a nice contrast with the naughtiness of what Posie wants and does in this story. If I may offer one tiny bit of constructive criticism, the story got just a little stilted in the beginning where you wrote out the stewardess's "turn off the seatbelt" speech for some reason and you talked about the "descent into O'Hare." But this is a quibble - great story and I look forward to reading more from you.

Seriously hot

Seeing Peter and Posie's love and ability to communicate is heart warming. Additionally, the erotic pieces of this yarn are hot and spicy, sounds like my favorite dish.

That was so incredibly hot and erotic. It was a great story, well written, excellent pacing, believable, and the sex scenes were great.

This was a well balanced story. The buildup was agonizing, but the payoff was well worth the wait with some very believable tenderness at the end. I look forward to reading more about these two!

Seriously Fucking HOT Story!

lovely story.. so romantic and sexy.. more please

I am anal erotic the same as Posie. But, I have never found a woman who had the same interest despite lots of tries. If I ever find one, our mutual fantasies would be filled. Where are you, woman?

I loved your story! I'm a bit naughty, yet I'm still a romantic at heart. I felt "Posie" combined the two perfectly for this HAPPY reader.

You kept it between man and wife. Thats what makes it so hot.

One of the best stories I have read. Incredibly erotic and SO loving.

Just every man's dream.

I could picture it all in my mind as I read and stroked in my excitement as well.

I hope we get to read more of Posie and Peter

Thanks so much

XXX

I've been reading stories for about 15 years on here. Your stories are great and put you in them. Just like a great story teller is supposed to do. This is my 1st feedback. It was that good. If you was Posie I'd die to be Peter. Thank you Bill

Just so hot! 5⭐️

Good premise.

But everything related to sex was much too mechanical.

Three stars.