All Comments on 'Pound Yon Virgin'

Predictable, but funny. Could make it into a movie- sort of already has!

"Writing bad checks" - that's funny.

Loved the last line, but gotta say, I saw it cumming ;).

...lol, and 'you busted my cherry!' Rofl! ...an awfully materialistic little bitch for being a preachers daughter, lol! (But also gotta say a high percentage of preachers kids I know, male and female, are fucking slutty as I am!)

loved the last line!!

This story is fantastic!!!!!! It got me off with the action and the last part gave me a great laugh too. Keep writing Sarah. You're beautiful !!!

I laughed out loud when I read the last bit. Keep writing. A13

Oh that was priceless! That ending made me laugh so hard. Omg that's what she gets for giving it up to santa. lol

" should have went to midnight mass ..."

"should have went"?

What language is that?

It sure as h*ll isn't English!!!

Possibly 'American', but CERTAINLY not English!

Very funny. Everything.

That was a greatstory and very simular to my first time. I was fifteen and at the mall all day. Near closing I saw a Santa and knowing that they are not real was talking to him about his day. He asked me what I wanted for Christmas and I told him that I was a virgin and wanted someone to fuck me. He told me that he had a camper in the parking lot and that he could take care of my problem. We walked out to his camper and when we got in I saw this large bed in the back. By the time I got to the bed I was naked. I lay back on the bed and watched Santa get out of his outfit. I gasped when I saw his big black cock and he started sucking my cunt. My period had finished about a week ago and now I was sitting on his chest trying to put his cock into my wet cunt. I was going to bareback him which I did for the next four weeks. My Christmas present was no period and four black daughters coming out of my white cunt nine months later. That following Christmas I went back to see if it was the same Santa and it was so I showed his his daughters and I missed my period that Christmas also with six more black daughters in me that year.

I think I've got a chance if I buy a santa suit and put on a few kilos .. I've love to cum down that chimney ..

Hi Sarah.....just loved it. All your usual humour with all the best sex you could get from Santa. I hope you get a (w)hole lot more over Xmas..maybe Santa will do overtime ! Anyway,I love all your stories and am a huge fan...keep us all cumming and have a Merry Christmas.. Mike.

That ways Amazing...Sarahhh I love your writing style, I could read it all day

Good Gracious! I came all over myself reading this one Sarahhh! Wonderful Story! I am a Santa Clause Impersonator! You can come see Black Santa ANYTIME!!! (except my checks won't bounce!!!)

LMFAO and had a good orgasm @ that story...

Yeah I truly loved it.I think sex and humor go real well.

LOL uhh...this really happened?

think not.

Hilarous story, kind of made me think of Bad Santa with Billy Bob Thornton

One of the best examples of humor in erotic writing. Outstanding.

I KNEW those checks were gonna be bad, he was just to happy to write them out why would a rich guy be working at santa in the mall. GREAT STORY i love it!

An absouletly hot story as always!!! You never disappoint in your descriptions in your stories!!! Absolutely fanfuckingtastic!!!! Keep up the good work, literally, it always gets me up!!!

loved the story! wish i could have been the one pushin his candy cane in but seems santa got there first ...atleast you got a Hot Early Gift from Uncle Thomas!!

It was nice that you got a fulfilling experience at the mall, although you would not be able to cash all those checks, it was so hot that it turned out to be your uncle baby! Love your story's!

I like to be a Santa - for you! I have a big sack - and a nice rod - like a real Santa and a lover. Could I meet you at Christmas shopping! I would carry all your lagguage and present you an nice place to rest. you wrote your experiences so lively - it's so as if I stood nearby and see and hear your cry and grunting. I know (from your stories) you can blow like an elevator. Oh Sarahhh ... you gave me a wunderful Christmas lekture! Thanks!!!

That's my favorite way to eat a peppermint stick!

Sarah, Sarah, Sarah,

What should I do with you? As always, a very good story - another home run.

But why does Santa get to be the lucky "stiff"? When are we going to collaborate on our own story?

Virgin or not,I still want to pound you!

Doc

as entertaining and nasty as ever. always a fun, arousing read. you better start taking atm cards! very enjoyable

once again sarah gives a good story

Sarahhh always writes the nastiest stories and this one won't disappoint. Getting fucked by Santa......sarahhh you shouldn't have!!

You've got the touch! Humor, imagination, talent- and red-headed, too. You'd be a heulluva present for anyone.

Great story,Sarrah,you horny wench!Would love to play Santa for you ,or any other game you had in mind.Keep writing,your stories turn us on!Steve

Loved the twist at the end

I loved this story and how I would love to pound yon virgin and be your santa

Oh how do I wish that I was that mall santa. Diference is, I would have let you try all the lipstick you wanted. Keep em cumming.

you left out the part where he fucked those outstanding tits of yours

Seems grossly unfair that even your own family stiff you like that, if you'll pardon the pun.

Perhaps I could make it up to you with a very special christmas present in your stockings? You might like to check out my submissions - I just posted (pending approval) my first and only story, which is something of a tribute. Hope you don't mind me stealing all your characters. ;)

Sarahhh

I'd love to write you a check.

Darkwng@aol.com

Sarah, You had me waiting to see what I could stuff in your stockings!!! Great story- Next year I am gonna wear a santa suit and look for the hot read head with a pouty set of lips at the mall and make sure she is not disappointed for Christmas- but with you it should be XXX-mas!!!

Great story. Love reading your endings. They are never what I would have expected. Keep writing.

Sarahhh,

You never cease to amaze me, wonderful once again. For Christmas what I would like to give you would be something that would create a whole new story.

Happy Holidays - Jack

I loved this story.

Sarahhh, Love this sexy entry just as much this year as the first time I read it. Hope the new readers have the opportunity to enjoy it as much we loyal readers!

Another great story from the vixen we have cum to admire and get all hot n bothered over!!!!

This story And All of Your Stories make me wanna Jack My Self Off... t/y so much... I Love to Stroke Myself as I read all of your stories....Thank you so much for making me feel so good Sarah... You are so HOT SARAH... I Love YOUUUUUUU... Damn you make me feel so good.... Larry...

Once again Sarahhh has taken our everyday life and made it one of fun, kinks, naughtiness and wishes cum true!! I wonder if Sarahhh can fit in my stocking tomorrow morning?

Another excellent story Sarah it really kicked my holiday off right. Just be sure to remember candy canes for my stocking!

this is the best one yet all are good but I really like this one

Been a fan of yours for some time, great reading the stories again, they never get tiring.

Loved the old stories. Enjoyed reading it again. Santa was a deserving old elf. That's why Santa needs to take a break. Some of the Mama's and sweet virgins (at least 18) get a kick out of making old Santa uncomfortable. After a few days Santa's reindeer start looking good, but that is another Christmas story.

sarahhh,

you've done again. simultaneous grins and boners

you're the only one who can make santa cum more than once a year

hilarious!

Thanks and

Merry Christmas

Oh! to be Santa, with Sarahhh on my lap...Yes!!!

Sarah Baby !, You Did It Again Girl !!!

I Have A Candy Cane For You Gal, And

It Comes With " Christmas Sauce " !!!!

Heres You A Christmas Jingle Girl............

...Here Cums Santa Clause, Here Cums Santa Clause, Humping All Night Long!!! Pulling,Stroking, Pumping As He Goes Along!!!

Thanks Sarah Girl And, MERRY CHRISTMAS Girl!!

TittySucker = Your # 1 Tenn. Fan !!

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WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! just when i think you had your best,then along cums another great one Merry Christmas

GOOD MORNING, SARAH DARLING,

I'M SURE GLAD I FOUND THIS, THIS MORNING, AS YOU CAN IMAGINE YOUR CHRISTMAS GIFT TOMORROW MORNING. AFTER YOU AND KIM FUCK ME ALL NIGHT LONG TONIGHT, WE ARE GOING TO THE TSC IN NASHVILLE AND HAVE A GOOD OL FASHIONED GANG BANG! YOU WANT YOUR FILL OF FUCKING? WELL, AL HAS INFORMED ME THAT HE WILL HAVE NO LESS THAN 25 MEN, 38 WOMEN THERE FOR YOU TO ENJOY! DONNA IS LOOKING FORWARD TO LICKING YOU AND WATCHING AL FUCK YOU ON THE DINING ROOM TABLE! ALL THE MEN WILL BE DRESSED AS SANTA CLAUS, WITH COCKS HANGING OUT! ONE MORE THING, DARLING DAUGHTER, I HOPE YOU STOPPED TAKING YOUR BIRTH CONTROL PILLS LIKE I TOLD YOU, AS I WANT TO GIVE YOU A BABY! YES, YOU ARE GOING TO GET PREGGERS!! SARAH WITH A BUN IN HER OVEN!! SO, SLEEP WELL TONIGHT, DARLING (AFTER WE FUCK OURSELVES TO SLEEP) AND I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU!

LOVE, DAD

one of sarahhh's best!

Santa know who is naughty and nice, and also nice and naughty!!!!!!!!!!!Kag45cal

Absolutely Great Story. Sarahhh is so talented with words (and other things) Sarahhh tells an erotic story with panache. I have read all of her stories and they are all superb.

Signed,

"Sarahhh-Loving Sid from the Great White North

Great story Sarah your the best I got a nice present for you but you will have to come to IL. to get it.

Sarahhh,

Once againyou have cum up with a good one. I enjoy your writing although I don'tbelieve you were ever that .... silly. If it was true you are invited to my place for a free shopping spree anytime.

Bill

another awesome entry Sarahhh!! love the twist!! hmmmmmm, what am i giving you for christmass this year? guess that depends on if you've been naughty or nice, i'll have to go double check my lists, see where you ended up!!

Very good... as always with a twist at the end... keep them coming...

if the picture is as good as those checks, im screwed

Thanks for the smile Sarahhh! Merry Christmas!

Thanks for lifting our holiday spirits Sarah. Have a Merry Christmas and all the best wishes for the new year. Looking forward to what tales you conjure up in 2009! Love ya!

Paul

I can't believe this actually happened to you! How ironic! The twist at the end is pretty funny. You have a nice writing style I like it. :]

That was pretty damn good.

Sarahhhh ... you are sooo good!

i loved the sex, but the use of the word "dude" was excessive and annoying.

The irony of this is just too perfect. I can't believe that something like this should happen in real life. I'm going to trust what you said at the beginning about this being real, but it's kinda hard to believe. Must have been even tougher for you. Good story though!

Hoo hoo, I knew that Santa was screwy, but this takes the cake, Sarah! I was sort of curious as 2 whether the condom was the flavoured kind. U recall the barber-pole rubber from the 'Doing the Nasty' segment, I hope! That would have been a nice touch 2 mention. I never expected the old break-In artist 2 turn out 2 B a relative, though. well written; MY bone rose 2 the occasion 4 this piece, dear! Oh boy, did it ever. 2 bad there was no Anal :( Uncle deserved some of that after Prison, from the OTHER side, now, though, U see! : )

A funny and hot story - it was great.

That was awesome! And I loved the twist at the end!

ok, thiswas one funny story. Dammit, couldn't even pound the flounder cuz I was laughing so hard

This was fun! And funny! And wicked! And the surprise ending tickled the hell outta me!

Love your work.

Ted

That was soo funny!I laughed out loud at the ending.

one of the most inventive story lines ive seen...could have improved it by more detailed discription of the girls reaction after learning the true screwing she had recieved via an incestious uncle.

sarah u did it again-thank you for all the joy you bring to us your fans :)

I think this was one of your best, Sarahhh.

Good and sexy and well explained.

Keep writing this stuff.

Your story made me smile, even though you are beautiful its even better that you have a good sense of humor. This story is so hot that it would melt the north pole.

Pete

It was funny, but made me hot too! I liked that you had Santa wear a condom. Made it seem more realistic even though it was not a realistic story to begin with. Liked the "Uncle" twist at the end! Very funny and nasty!

Great Ending

Sarahhh, amazing as always! There is no writer as talented as you! The story was hot and I certainly enjoyed it! ;)

I didnt like it. It was just unrealistic and...

Idontknow. Bad.

I love the way you write, the different ideas, phrases, and a twist to the ending. It is not just a great sex story, but a thrilling story.

Kermit

As they said on Family Guy, "POW! Right in the kisser! POW! Right in the kisser! POW! Right in the kisser! POW! Right in the kisser!..." You get the picture ;)

You should show cocks above to rate the success of your story. I'm still jellin'.

So, doesn't the original go, "mother and child." Is there a follow-up flashback involving mom and uncle, or perhaps a future one with the three of you?

Daddy wants to know.

You know all the way that the checks are no good. This Santa is making great sales. Or great buys, I guess.

The fact it is a long lost uncle is an added twist. She can now say she knows her uncle very well; intimately.

I can see that I always offered the wrong incentive to the little virgins.

Good story!!

You never fail to spark the imagination and stimulate my primal desires!! I love this story babes....almost as if it happend to me!!

-manosteel

blue balls are the color of the ornaments on my tree not to mention some where else. Good job Sarah. Looking forward to my xmas card. bruce

You are an author par excellence. No one can mix a dirty little story with a dose of humor like you. Well done.

all your 101 sons and daughters love you so...

Sarah, you do write interesting tales of how you lost your virginity. Surprising that the rupturing of your hymen, still alowed you to enjoy, the agony of defeat. A little difficult to believe, that you could deep throat on your very first venture into fellatio. But it is nice to fantasize about what it might be like to deflower a virgin, both her pussy, and her mouth.

A good ending indeed!!!

What a great Xmas present this was...a wonderful hard on just from readng this story!. Why couldn't I ever have met such a beautiful naive young virgin at a mall? Maybe next year I'll go shopping in a Canadian Mall. Perhaps I can meet someone like over the Spring Holiday if I dress like the Easter Bunny. But, Sarah...you just keep getting better and better and hotter and hotter. Keep it up-just you like you keep me up!

really good story and terrific punch line sarah.

It might be bias, but Outstanding story. Sarahhh gets better and better with each story. She's my favorite author.

what a Santa! What a virgin! Great Sarahhh!

Monk

great story-loved the ending-it was hot & just the right length & with the right surprise -as you know i've followed your career for a long time-getting better all the time-cant wait for the next book-will you autograph it for us:)?

Another classic from Sarahhh. Especially loved the surprise ending.

As always you have proven your are a very naughty girl. One that any Santa would love to stuff with his goodies. Maybe Santa should tie you to the chimmey and spank your behind before entering the warm tight wetness of your virgin love? I wonder what Mrs. Claus would think? Or would she want to enjoy the gift you gave Santa? I know if I was Santa I would make the night last 365 days a year, each night giving you something wonderful to enjoy. And the words Ho Ho Ho take on a new meaning with our nasty little girl. Well little sweet one, may all your dreams be wet and hot and may Santa visit you each night giving you many delights. Now get down on your knees and show Santa what a good girl you are.

UrGuy