All Comments on 'Powers of the Mind Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Worth expanding

Good story marred by a few silly spelling mistakes (titties, not tities).

Altogether, not at all bad. Please write more.

jbhoft7jbhoft7about 16 years ago
Spelling Mistakes

Otherwise it was a fine story. Now follow it up with him reading Greg's mind about what he truly wants out of his research. Then run with it give the boy a harem of girls and female teachers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Story!

Good Job. Very well done.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 4 years ago
wow

can't wait for next chapter.

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