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mark29891mark29891over 11 years ago

Please continue the story. I love Sarah and Ellie

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I second continuing this story. Please write more about them. I love the way you write these two, especially the way that Ellie just worships Sarah. It's so hot. And I'm really glad we finally got to see Ellie go down on Sarah. I've been waiting for that since the first story. Another reason you need to keep writing these two, so we get more moments like that.

Maybe you could have Sarah introduce her bitch to somebody like Carina. That would be incredibly hot. Whatever you come up with (if you continue this story, which I really hope you do) will be awesome, I'm sure. Thank you for this!

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