All Comments on 'Praying for Rain Ch. 04'

Sorry to read the end, it just didn't do anything for me as there were so many possibilities... I think you should have waited until the motivation came to continue the story... thank you though!

This type of fiction is supposed to suspend disbelief, that's what makes them so endearing. If the author can't take the time and just uses typical crutches like Massive Cocks, Untold Riches, Broken women who prefer to live in an Orgy like Commune, World Class Dance Talent, A Masters in Suave, etc, etc, etc... It just makes it such a boring piece of garbage. Zzzzzzzz. It's no surprise the ratings on this "series" go down. What's sad is the sad sack readers who rate this any a 4.5+. This author could certainly pen some remarkable work if the effort was extended. It just wasn't here. jahoo

Sure it's unrealistic from start to inish but what romance is? And I loved the character development throughout all the chapters, well done!

I really enjoyed your story, and its undercurrent of the battle between pain and sorrow and love and optimism. For those of you who feel its too far fetched, I know of an engineer who one night in the 1960's, picked up a young lady who was siting by the side of the road, destitute. She had been kicked out of her boyfriend's car after she had caught him cheating and had nothing to her name. He at first helped her, and then eventually fell in love and married her. Their romance had many unorthodox twists and turns, not unlike your story here. So well done and good writing! By the way, you may like "God of Mischief and Lies" by FireFaery. - Loki finds something he can't control. They have some similar themes and Kelly and Aevelyn make quite a pair of heroines.

Great series , Enjoyed reading the series.

Great work...I wouldn't change a thing which is saying something for me.