All Comments on 'Price of Passage'

Cream of this crop.

Amazing story I loved every bit of it. You should definitely write more stories with gay dragons!

I read this after having read this writers later story--Feathers.

Both of these stories are interestingly original in the concept and in the execution.

Good writing!

You are clearly a supremely talented writer. To have depicted sex between two imaginary and non-humanoid creatures in such an appealing way, and in so few words! I felt the taboo, the power, the sensuality of the sexual act between these fierce and proud beings. I don't know what they are on earth to do and I almost don't care; I just feel satisfied and somehow energised after experiencing that intense glimpse into their lives. Amazing.

well its some thing new .?

I love when I find truly fantastic stories. The fantasy aspect of this one drew me in immediately and I love the sensual depiction of reluctance yielding to overpowering physical surrender. Your alien characters are interesting, their mission on our planet (I assume) intrigues me, and I wonder if we'll be seeing more of them. Thanks! :)