All Comments on 'Prince Charming Ch. 02'

I see that you now have an editor. This chapter was much easier to read! I really think i'm going to enjoy your story but you might want to make your chapters a little longer. You know, more "meat".

Why did u have to end it there lol.It was great cant wait for the next chapter

great job. the grammar is much better. great flow. wait to keep us in suspense.lOl

nice story.. more please.. :)

Love it more please!

okay update this already please ?

update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good stuff!

Time for chapter three.

I just found this story and like both chapters I noticed that it has been a lonnnnnnng time since you update. I hope that you muse if gone comes back and inspires your to complete Shane and Carmen's story.

Thank you for sharing.

so far good waiting for chapter three

I have really enjoyed your two chapters and know how hard it can be to complete a story. Really looking forward to your next entry. Wishing you the very best in inspiration...

I'm ready for Chapter 3 now . This is a really good story .

i certainly want more. update soon

This is good. And geuinuly sweet. You should keep it up.

How are you gonna leave me hanging like that..

These are G's stories you're posting, they're blurbs. They're too damned short and it irritates a die hard reader to start something and a minute later, it's over. It's reminiscent of bad sex. Make your chapters a LOT longer and then post them. You speak n a pretty decent yarn so folks will wait.