All Comments on 'Princess & The Pauper'

The Princess needs some assertiveness training.

Sorry.

1* enough said.

WTF

Not your best work, too short. Gave it a four out of respect.

so she is fucking grandpa and paying for his booze?sounds like an idiot getting played.

I think of course your scenes are beautifully made, but you are always able to weave some funny dialogue in too.

That said...when the hell is the next time we get to see our favorite Paladin in such a position?

Glad you're back, Mr. Tasker.

I hope you spin a series out of this.

Love the silly sweetness. Reminds me of a romance with a younger girl back then, shame that it doesn't work out. I hope there be a sequel.

Very much enjoyed it, hoping for more!

But I couldn't even get through the second paragraph. Yikes.

I hope there will be a second part of this story. I have an idea of how it will continue if you like a good twist?

My idea:

This old pauper took the place of the real Periwinkle, that was a joung man who really wrote the beautiful letters and poems. He tricked him and made the poor boy watch from a distance, bound and gagged, when the pauper took the prinses in the dirty ally.

Let me know if you like this idea.

the beggar could actually be a handsome young man under a curse.