All Comments on 'Princess Prick Tease'

Nuevo riche? That's intentional, I hope, because it shows that Adam wants to impress by using foreign clichés but lacks the education to do it correctly. Hopefully, an accidental faux pas (not a "foh pah"). But there is no other evidence that it's to show a facet of his character.

Try either "nuevo rico" (Spanish) or, more likely, "Nouveau riche" (French).

A little research goes a long way for pedants like me, especially when the rest of the tale is so interestingly written.

Thanks for you helpful advice but I am afraid you will find i am right with a simple google search that I did before using the term to be sure of what I was adding to my story. I will be sure too look at all possibilities in the future but we can never please everyone.

~ellie

Anonymous is correct...just because you can google others using a term incorrectly doesn't mean it is good usage :-) In fact, I'll bet google will change the term for you to nouveau riche...

- Another pedant

Hi I really liked the story, are you going to continue as I would like to know more between grace and the mysterious Tristan

Multiple themes , quite a bit of intrigue. Keep going you are on to something good.

I stopped reading when the "angry" guy raped her in the alley.

I respect and love women too much to have men force themselves on a reluctant lady. That to me is as good as rape which is why I have never even opened the nonconsent/reluctance category where this should be.

Wrong category - desperately disappointing.

I've been reading your works over the last few days and given mainly 5s with the occasional 4

Apologies but I couldn’t finish this, it was truly awful.