All Comments on 'Prize Bull Ch. 04'

Nice follow up. You are keeping a good consistency with your characters. That she took her error seriously, and he stepped up to ask for what he wanted, both speak well for the relationship. Dara went into this with her ideas and fantasies, but little research and preparation. Sounds like Travis did more research than she did, once he git a clue. I think it would strengthen their bond for both to become better educated: kinks in general, safety, limits, personal preferences. Of course, as a female driven relationship, definitely discussions are a must. ;)

Poor Travis. Two weeks on his own with his parents gone. He'll be so lonely. ;D:D:D

After she shows us that she is bat shit crazy, you really think he wouldn't have left and never come back? Or had her arrested? This is bad, even for fictional porn.

Love what I've read so far, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Next installment coming in a few weeks; I'm trying to finish up a Halloween entry. Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

live this story can't wait to reap part 5 and u totaly agree with fa jf got some really good points

Just put part 5 in the queue for approval. Will be up as soon as Laurel gets to it!

Just a terrible story.

carliplum I m just totally enthralled by your imagination

I'm done with this. 4 chapters was obviously 1 page and a chapter too many. Shame coz chapters 1-3 were great.

Have voted the same for all. This comment goes for everything I have read of yours.

Wonderful!

Are you a Doctor? I have never seen such genius understanding of male psychology. Truly one of a kind.

How is he ever going to interact in the outside world? Shes not at all over her divorce an is twiting this young man evilly.