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All Comments on 'Prized Inheritance Ch. 01'

by gimlisam

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I couldn't count ALL the mistakes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I agree with the need of an editor for Spelling and grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
hot, well written, but spell check :)

Hot, well written, but spell check and grammar check. Also is it Jack or JAKE??? The mistakes are distracting to an otherwise engaging, hot storyline.

oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
Great Start

too short intro but the players are well defined. A hint of what will be a very wicked long story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
a bit confusing...

Definitely too short, and I didn't really understand what was going on the whole time...is it supposed to be that the reader is as clueless as Jack?

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