All Comments on 'Probe is a Synonym for Exploration'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love the story - hate the title

Story moves along well, really enjoyed some of the visuals, title doesn't do the story justice though, you should work harder on that, it's important - like naming a child. You took a very promising first child here and named him Eggbert.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Outstanding!

More, please. And I agree, ditch the title.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Quite while you are ahead

I was going to rate it higher until the last paragraph!!!!

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