All Comments on 'Professor Gets His Way'

You did well with this story. Thank you for the fantasy.

Loved it! Please write more!! Thank you!!

Keep a more watchful eye on your typos, however! '...her thing-clad ass...' and ...h te paddle...' could deter some people from reading further, which would have been a shame.

Tighten things up a bit and keep writing these ace stories! Thank you.

If you had perhaps edited it, or had someone else edit it, the story would have been much better. All the errors and typos were very distracting. Also, i felt that the story was a little slow and stretched out. It could've been shortened quite a bit so it wasn't so slow. Other than that, it was a pretty good story. I just needed to be edited :)

The story has potential, I hope to see some sequels - but a proofreader could make reading a lot easier.