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He then leaned over and kissed her, completely without warning or permission. A slow, deep kiss, tasting each other and his cum. He released the kiss, stood up and walked out of the room, leaving her bent over her desk, a puddle of her own cum dripping down the side of the desk onto the floor, her ebony ass still naked and exposed to the now open doorway.
She didn't care.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe story has potential, I hope to see some sequels - but a proofreader could make reading a lot easier.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIf you had perhaps edited it, or had someone else edit it, the story would have been much better. All the errors and typos were very distracting. Also, i felt that the story was a little slow and stretched out. It could've been shortened quite a bit so it wasn't so slow. Other than that, it was a pretty good story. I just needed to be edited :)
Anonymousover 11 years agoKeep a more watchful eye on your typos, however! '...her thing-clad ass...' and ...h te paddle...' could deter some people from reading further, which would have been a shame.
Tighten things up a bit and keep writing these ace stories! Thank you.
deviantegoover 11 years agoYou did well with this story. Thank you for the fantasy.
