All Comments on 'Project Girl Ch. 02'

Your dialogue's more than a little clunky. If you maybe just have your chasracters moan in orgasm, instead of telling each other they're cumming all the time, then it should be alright

the part in both of your stories when their peeein on each other i did not like i found it very disgusting and unbelivable other wise good job i love both progect girl 1&2

A wonderful story--wish I had been there. I have not seen golden showers presented in such an erotic manner and like that as well. I love how you use each moment to build to a climax. Don't change a thing and keep writing.

Working this white pussy while yearning to be licking black pussy. Oh yeah!